remark (upon someone's) work

Translations
делать замечание (о чьей-либо) работе
The manager remarked upon his work, pointing out areas for improvement.
Менеджер сделал замечание о его работе, указав на области, требующие улучшения.
Definitions
To make a comment or observation about the quality, content, or characteristics of someone's work, often offering feedback, praise, or criticism.